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"Raphael will send for you tomorrow. You can stay here until sunset."
Then Ms. V vanished into the house. Amber awkwardly lingered until Raphael came up with more champagne and offering fruit. He suggested she sit in the hot tub. She decided to do just that. Stretching out in the big hot tub by herself she let the jet pulse over her pussy. It was teasing her so much, she ended up leaving after 20 minutes to go home and masturbate. She desperately needed to cum.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 7 years agoSuggest you reread your typescript a few more times before posting or, better still, use an editor.
Poor construction, missing or additional words and changes of tense are present throughout and irritating.
I like the premise of the story and it should develop nicely whichever way you decide to take it.
