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Click hereOctavian studies her for a while in silence. He tilts his head to Lucas, "And what is it about him?"
Eve's gaze drifts over to her sub, her eyes wandering over his body, his half hard cock before she looks him in the eye, but responds to Octavian, "I'm fairly certain that Lucas would be willing to be a switch with me. And that is something I need, because I damn near broke my own contract and fucked him the other day."
Lucas gets a slow grin on his face, "I'd definitely be a switch with you, Eve. I'm not sure which one of us that encounter tormented more but the thought of topping you is just as delicious as seeing you have power over me."
"And William?" Octavian asks, voice devoid of emotion as he draws Eve's attention back to him.
Eve turns to him, her smile fading, "That, I am unsure of. He is definitely a loose cannon, but...perhaps...if he and I encountered each other here..." She studies Octavian's reaction, her stomach starting to churn when he gives no response. She turns her gaze away from him towards the far side of the room, "This is why I don't let anyone in. There is too much...darkness...in me."
Octavian's gentle hand strokes on her cheek, drawing her attention back towards him, "I accept you as you are, Gwen Harrison. Darkness and all. Please, don't think that being honest will ever deter my affections for you." He leans down, placing a gentle kiss on her lips, "But if you do want to encounter William again, all I ask is that you have a third party watching to ensure your safety."
A genuine smile forms on her face as she tenderly kisses him back, "Yes, Master."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoThe story is well written with only a few mistakes.
As for the content, it is so far from my comprehension as to be an entirely alien world.
I find it in turn, absurd, ridiculous, entertaining, repetitive, nauseating, disturbing, smug but above all, distasteful. I genuinely feel the need to shower, to remove the vestiges of bile.
pk2curiousover 3 years agoAD says " I've found that not only has interest for them dropped off but my writing has begun to evolve past the need to continue it any further. Please vote and comment! "
I find that very hard to believe that any interest in your work has " dropped off " . I am sure that your gaugees are the voting and the reader responses . It's nothing new and no secret that there has always been a disconnection here in Literotica . Between the readers and the authors . But it is just the way a lot of Literotica readers are . They breeze through story after story . Author after author . Not even stopping to vote on a chapter . Much less having the decency to give praise or mention the enjoyment that they felt while captivated by the stories .
For years I was like that as well . Didn't know that clicking the stars would make or break a story . Didn't think any words I could say would matter . Of course now I know I was wrong .
We aren't paying for these GR8 works of endless art that these highly gifted writers so graciously offer to us .
So without voting feedback . Without comments , questions , reviews , etc . How the hell is an author going to know that his or her work has been well received ? He or she won't have a clue . If only 1 in 100 readers that loved the story vote or comment . The author doesn't know that that story was 100 times more successful than the facts on paper show . That isn't fair . Because the facts and the stats are wrong . False . Misleading . Discouraging . Certainly not motivating or uplifting . Like they should . And this happens everyday . To so many incredible writers .
I'm not exaggerating AD . The actual numbers of readers that love your tales are 100 or 200 times more than you know . Because the insensitive , selfish readers don't know enough to stop and smell the roses . And show appreciation for the knowledge and entertainment that has been so freely and generously bestowed upon them . You are one hell of a talented author . In fact I am going to have to contact you . To find out where the rest of your works are . I'm thinking you must have 3 or 4 times more than you allow on this site . I will read it all .
Thank you . Don't let this site get you thinking anything negative .
Anonymousover 5 years agoBest character development in a Lit story series I have seen in several years; well done! A bit of editing and this could easily be published...
Anonymousover 5 years agoThank you for the excellent series. I'm pretty bummed it's over. I would have loved to follow Eve through further growth and self examinations. And, I'm really sorry we won't be getting a couple of scenes between Eve and Lucas.
Oh well. It was excellent while it lasted! Good luck with your future work.
Admiralbird348over 5 years agoHow you set up that scene and had it play out was superb! Her explanations and acceptance by her men was so well thought out, and endearing. Who would have thought this would or could end happily! You have so grown as a writer🤩
Merry Christmas Dusky Girl 😘
