The Smell of Sex Ch. 04

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Later, Monique came back and stripped down to her underwear again and the girls began eating pizza. Laura was driven to distraction as she watched cheese and sauce fall onto the dark girls formerly white panties.

Monique took off the panties she had been wearing and while Laura watched intently, slipped on a negligee.

"Ok Laura, time for beddie-bye.." she said as she stripped Laura's bed of all its bed covers.

"This is so that you don't try to do a sneaky .. and masturbate without telling me" answering Laura's unspoken question.

Laura laid down in the bed, then Monique kissed Laura lightly on the head making sure she gave her a peek at her large black breasts.

"Nighty night girl friend. You've been such a good girlie today, Mommy is so proud of you for telling the truth and trying hard not to be a pervie" she said.

Then she pulled off the panties she had been wearing and stretched them over Laura's face. "Now these be your nightie from now on .. " the black girl taunted the lusting white.

Try as she might, Laura couldn't fall asleep. 'What did Monique mean when she said,"Mommy is so proud of you"? I don't think my mommy would be very proud if she saw me sleeping naked on the bed with a black girl's soiled panties over my face. I think she would be disgusted if she knew how hot and wet I am, just from the smell her sex. Oh God, even the garlic and oregano from the pizza sauce that fell on them is turning me on.'

Her new nightie served as a humiliating reminder of all that stood between sexual deviancy and her old normal life.

"Monique???"

"Monique?"

"Yes, Laura." Monique answered delighted.

"I can't s-s-sleep. I need to ahh m-masturbate .. again."

"Now that's fine but .. Say it right."

There was a long pause.

"PLEASE Monique!, I'm dying to ....... FINGER FUCK my SMELLY wet CUNT."

"Now isn't that better? OK get off the bed and kneel right here." Monique said, patting the floor beside her bed.

"That's it girl, I want you facing my ass.."

"REMEMBER this, cuz that's how you gonna beat off for us from now on .. OK??"

"Come on baby .. " Monique assured the kneeling girl. Rubbing the girls hair as she stuck her nose between the cantelope shaped globes of her ass.

"Go ahead Laura Lezz. And don't forget to smell my panties while you play with your tiny titties."

Monique watched Laura's pantie covered face press in her ass, as the white girl, shuddered in the dark.

"This is taking to long, you must not *need* to cum pervie." Monique chided the small girl.

"Oh fuck! I've got to hurry!' thought Laura, as she arched her back as she began fingering herself with a vengeance. Laura could smell the earthy scent of Monique's ass as she buried her nose in the crack and inhaled.

"Oh yeah...oh fuck....my pussy...mmmmm...panties...oh..oh..oh..ahhhhh" Laura cried as she climaxed.

Then Monique saw Laura's movements stop, she ordered, "Good job, my little lezzie *brown noser* .. Now go back to your bed."

As the exhausted white coed climbed into bed, Monique pushed the button on her remote, and the red light began to glow underneath Laura's bed. 'My plan be coming along much better than I ever imagined. I've had two of the best cums in my life watching Laura act on the urges I planted in her subconscious. Hell, I didn't even had to blackmail the slut tonight. She's been a willing volunteer.' Monique, had been tempted to edit the tape Laura was listening to, but the blonde was just soo receptive. Besides, it wasn't half as much fun as watching the bimbo fall for her blatant manipulations .. and she really didn't mind sharing Laura with the Goth girl or the professor.

'Yeah, today's been a good day!' Monique thought as she fell asleep.

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RunsAmokRunsAmokover 7 years ago
Mostly good

I really enjoyed the humiliation and submission here. The reasoning behind the poor treatment was somewhat logical (at least to someone too desperate and horny to think). It made things a bit better.

I was consistently brought out of the chapter by the black girl's speech patterns. It's great to get into the role play, and some odd turns of speech here and there can really flavor a scene. The degree of usage however was far too much. I have trouble believing that the black roommate is a gifted enough engineer to create a mind control machine. At times I had to stop and snigger over the overblown speech, which took me out of the sexy mood. I think some early on references to odd patterns of speech would be good while establishing character. Perhaps have the white roommate reflect that she mentally translates it a lot, so that you can touch it early on and let it be after that. It would make for a smoother scene. As it stands it comes off rather insulting.

Speaking of insults, the humiliation through language was done very well here. I loved how the black roommate would add in lines like "you've done very well" and "it's okay, I'm not mad, you can sniff me." Then she'd go back to using insults and disdain. It was a hot mix. Everything else in the chapter was done really well. Nice job!

hazelbehazelbeabout 14 years ago
Dumb Stereo types

I was reading this story from ch 1 and then in this ch got so turned off by the shitty way you had the black girl talking. It was just fucking retarded with your lack of understanding phonetics even if you thought you were writing with "ebonics". Piss poor job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
love it but...

i love this story but the ebonics kinda ruin it for me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
formulaic but fine

OK, so the story is following is familiar formula, but it is still a good read. Couture is doing a good job and I hope it continues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good but familiar

Not so very different from the stories we have had from the author over the years and so lacks interest.

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