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Donnie watched his mother whack the older man on the shoulder. With one hand on his penis, the older man tried to run away. They chased each other around the honeymoon bed.
During this time, the men with the camera looked at Donnie. At that, Donnie turned to them and yelled.
"Why are you all standing around here?" said Donnie, "Keep those cameras rolling. We've got a show to film."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoThink it's well-written. Finding that I don't care for the direction of the plot.
Joshuad2477salmost 5 years agoDo everyone a favor and never write again. You took a decent beginning and turned it into a peice of garbage that sounds like a Jerry Springer episode. Even a idiot can see the next chapter of an orgy of Phil Jan Donnie and the daughter which sounds like another peice of garbage and if that happens it would just make Jan a stupid whore for fucking the asshole who got her drunk just to fuck her and knock her up and poor Donnie would be left in love with a knocked up dumbass whore. No story with a gapping plot hole and no characters to connect with.
Anonymousover 9 years agoNothing and nobody should ever come between a boy's hard young cock and his mother warm wet cunt. For fuck's sake--he's her own son, he came out of that cunt. How could anyone else have the right to go back up that wonderful hole between her legs, anyone besides her own darling boy? For any boy, his mother's cunt has several functions. It's his own birth canal, it's the welcoming sheathe for his young cock, and it's the receptacle nature provides for all the creamy semen in his hot young balls. For anyone else cock and semen it's strictly off limits.
badmommy71over 9 years agoyou were writing a beautiful love story between a wonderful mother and her sexy son but then you went off the rails hon. :-((
Anonymousover 9 years agoi think its neat she is fucking somebody else. im sic off reeding all these goody goody 2 shoes nice ending stories all the time
