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"Titus!"
"Yes Titus. He's not off the grid you know. We talk or text a couple times a week. Right now he's on the Canadian side of Niagara Falls."
"I know," said Beth, feeling a little depressed. The latest videos he'd posted showed him a pretty Asian woman fucking. There'd also been a picture of the two of them in rain ponchos standing on a boat deck under the falls. They looked like they were having a great time.
"Time for mother and son to get some rest," said a nurse coming in and reaching for Atlas. Beth cringed, holding Atlas tightly, not wanting to let him go, but she relented and handed him off to the nurse.
Beth lifted David's envelope and opened it.
"What is it?" asked Mary.
"Divorce papers."
Mary's phone dinged again. "Titus says, congratulations. I hope both Mother and son are doing well." Mary looked up from the phone. "Anything you want me to tell him?"
Tell him I love him. Tell him I miss him. She looked at her baby in the nurse's arms. "Yes," said Beth. "Tell him, thank you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous1 day agoAgree with prior Anonymous. This just vile tripe. Ignore the cervix nonsense, the characters are just execrable. And what takes the case is David's mother supporting Beth despite all she has done. Also the racist stereotypes are nauseating, and apparently some readers get off on that. Ughh
Anonymous7 months agoWhat a mess. Try taking some basic anatomy classes. Check out some statistics of penis sizes. Lose some of the demeaning racial tropes that demonize black men as always being assholes. The cervix cannot be penetrated except at the end of a pregnancy buy anything short of a sharp instrument. The idea that a large penis will do that is ridiculous. Does the author or any of your readers who gleefully jack of to this tripe, even know the cervix is? For a standard vagina, if you have reasonably length gingers you can easily feel and massage the cervix. Hitting the cervix with a penis just means being a bit above average and getting a good angle for deep penetration. And a guy like Titus who just rips up marriages everywhere he goes and acts so callously, would be quickly met with a bloody end. Just takes one mistake of folling with the wrong guy's wife or girlfriend. And Beth is just a vapid skank. Nothing remotely redeeming about her character. And yes clas moves by Teddy at the end taking the flowers that David tossed away and giving them to her as if he ever had a thought of actually buying flowers for the mother-to-be. Yes it is fiction and fantasy. But sometimes a little bit of reality actually makes it readable. And oh yeah she is still OK with Titus abandoning her for the 21 yr old redneck. Lol.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoCrying because he left her he was cheating SUPRIZE D___A__. What would you expect cheater. Damaged your marriage sleep in the bed you made.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoWhile exciting to read Cervix Penetration is Medically & Biologically Impossible. Had thought of commenting in earlier Chapters but didn't want to be a spoilsport for other readers.
More scenes and better variety in this new series but critical Opinion veering, changing course and turning around to the point that the Original went into the conclusion part better. Sorry!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThis in my view, is one of your best stories to date. Outstanding way that you have developed the characters and the storyline. Am looking forward to see more. Hope in the future you decide to include the characters of Lily, Mary and Teddy, and have Beth give Titus _hit over dumping her in the motel.
