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Click here"Ray has given me an ultimatum. He wants to fuck you and he says that the only way I can keep seeing you is if you agree to be his for a couple of hours every now and again," Dante said with tears in his eyes.
"Damn, would you stop seeing me if he told you to?" Kyle asked stunned.
"I would have to, baby."
"Fuck I don't want to lose you but I don't know if I can let that ass wipe fuck me."
"I know and I don't want you to, even though I really want to keep seeing you."
The conversation ended with Kyle offering to try. He was too into Dante to simply walk away. The encounter between Ray and Kyle went bad due to Ray's zealous domination and humiliation of Kyle. My teddy bear had turned into a grizzly. After sucking Ray's dick and taking a hard fucking and even accepting a few slaps on the ass Ray got too cocky. He went for some ball torture and even nastier humiliation then he had already given out. Kyle turned the tables on the Dom and ended up giving Ray a pretty good beating. He managed to regain control and stopped short of doing any real damage. However, Dante paid the price of the uncontrolled rage and Kyle's first love affair ended.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoMinor spoiler, but people who disliked the dom/sub stuff and Ray in this chapter might want to read the next one. It’s short, and you’ll like its plot.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI'd just like to point out that John and Kyle had an understanding of how things would work between them. Kyle can't change those rules on his own, if he wanted things to change, he should have talked to John first. I don't think they will end up together anyways, they don't seem sexually compatible. Seeing as Kyle never communicated that what he wanted from the relationship had changed, he shouldn't be making John feel bad.
And I think its ok to include a bit of Dom/Sub in there. The story seems to be about John exploring his sexuality...and that's part of it. John is dominant (not a Dom) and he should explore that side as well.
4catsrminealmost 12 years agoI have to totally agree with Curious Mark. The dom/sub thing doesn't fit in this story. But, I'll keep reading just to see if John and Kyle do get together. John is such a whore since he found m/m sex. I can see Kyle loves him. I'm hoping John calms down and realizes he has a good thing with Kyle.
TimothyMalmost 12 years agoYou came to that conclusion a lot faster than me. I stuck with this story for another 10 or 15 chapters, but I finally got too pissed off with the main character and his silly stunts. A shame, because the story had a lot of potential and some really great ideas, as well as being wll written.
