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The green blast was quickly followed by dozens more that criss-crossed between the two insectoid fleets. Swarms of drones appeared as the sensor data returned more information, the nimble strike craft engaged in a vicious dogfight with others of their kind, punctuated by vivid explosions.
"By the Great Protector..." Brokurlun muttered in astonishment. "They are firing on each other!"
- COMMENTS
ShaggyDogStoryabout 1 month agoThe snacks, shags and snoozes continue. It's surprising that, so far into the story, the pacing remains so wonky.
Colonists remain in peril but let's stop for overlong, clunky, soapy dialogue, repeating the same shallow conversations over and over. The main characters continue to flatter each other, then we finally get an interesting cliffhanger, pages later than we should have.
I still mourn for Tashana's crew, they were actually interesting. The main crew is a borefest.
Michael56Smith2 months agoFaye is a good girl, and is a wonderfully helpful AI for the ship, along with the 'Bots, she really runs the Invictus for John and the Girls, ... I hope that sometime soon, they can find a way / a method to give Faye her dream of being one of John's girls (for real), .... but if Pinocchio becomes real, then who'll do all the things Faye does for the ship and crew, ... I am sure she could do some of the stuff, but her digital self was literally EVERYWHERE on the ship, watching, managing, helping out, .... I think she runs the ship flawlessly and she is John's singing Alarm clock too, ... the lovely little powerhouse is an AI dream come true (thank you Mael'nerak, .... ;-) ttfn
onecuriousreader8 months agothis is a good story, but the romance is waay to mushy for my taste, sometimes I wonder, does john really have 4 balls? or are 2 of them low-key ovaries? I mean no one has done an autopsy on a progenitor before haha.. just here for the fucking and fighting now.
Michael56Smith9 months agoTony is damned lucky that he was a "good guy" and saved those girls, who later saved him, from a vengeful Alyssa, .... An arm regrown, an ankle mended, and a very nasty blast wound, as well as an old STD cured, .... Rachel's was a busy girl, ... And I love how helpful Faye always is, she makes their small crew able to do the work of hundreds, .... now, can they retrieve the rest of the Karron population? '-) ttfn
Michael56Smith11 months ago-- now that Fat Tony with Kelli and Perl are all saved, am going to miss the story, sub-plot, ... anyway, that was a fine chapter, ... lots revealed, ... the gang got Tachyon rifles with runic penetrator ammo (bad ass weapons), and Dana got to turn the lights back on in Karron, that had to have been an old dream of hers, ....
-- I have been picturing Karron as a Ceres or Pluto sized dwarf planet, ... maybe just a bit larger and denser too, with all that mineral wealth, ... and that might be why Tef never mentions it having noticeably lighter gravity, the denser little world is pretty heavy, so its gravity is nearer to 1G (one Earth gravity), .... maybe, ... ;-) ttfn
