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Lori and I were divorced eight months later. We still occasionally see each other whenever we get together at one of the kids' homes. We're friendly and I suspect Lori still wants more, but that isn't going to happen!
Every time I feel a spark toward Lori, I think of the video of her bent over Steve's dining room table, with his face firmly planted between her ass cheeks, as she was yelling, 'Use your tongue as toilet paper and clean my asshole!'
Nope! There's no getting over that!
5 stars.
Hard to love - and especially trust - a sadist.
She gets off on hurting people. Scary.
More described sex, more raw emotion and slut explaining (trying to...) herself.
Good story, more depth!
The story seems to be missing the page between 2 and 3 where all of the emotions and conflict bubble up and occur between Steve and Lori. The end just appears and the story fizzles. Furthermore I’m perplexed with the timeline as relates to the Wednesday FB video postings and the Thursday confrontation with Steve.
A good effort though not up to par for author’s norm. I wanted more avert BTB.
Thanks for sharing John.
For me this ended way too quickly. I'm sure that Lori and Steve suffered for their betrayals with their respective families, their friends and work colleagues but by you not including it in the story it also opens up the possibility that didn't happen. A good story should be divided into "thirds" with the beginning setting the scene and describing the background which is about 25% to 33% of the book. The middle section which is developing the plot, weaving in the various storylines and setting up the ending should be about 33% to 50% of a book and the finish should be, like the beginning, about 25% to 33%. Unfortunately this story had about 5% as an ending and so it feels unfinished and unsatisfactory which is a pity as the first part is good. It ends up average at best. You normally do good work, this one isn't one if your better one's. Sorry. BardnotBard