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Click hereAlas, he wasn't a bad man. He was a good man. He was a man who'd be thrilled to have someone like her in his life. Yet, was he enough man for her, that was the question? Perhaps, she could teach him and train him how to be bad. Perhaps, she could show him how to take her and force her how to have his wicked, sexual way with her naked body. Perhaps, he'd enjoy stripping her naked, spanking her, and exposing her to his friends. Perhaps, what Susan needed was to train a good man on how to be a bad man.
First things first. She couldn't wait to stroke his cock and suck his cock while they pretended to watch the movie. She couldn't wait for him to cum in her mouth and swallow his cum. She couldn't wait to make him her bitch in sexual training.
Then, after the movie, she'd accept his invitation home and have him strip her naked. She'd allow him to have his wicked, sexual way with her big, naked breasts. She'd show him how to take her and force her to fuck him. She'd show him how to lick and finger her cunt. While talking dirty to him, she expected him to give her multiple, sexual orgasms, in the way she planned to give him the same. Finally, she found a good man, a very good man, that she'd soon train into being a bad man, a very bad man.
THE END
- COMMENTS
A_Nice_Manabout 3 years agoHello Natty or Freddie or Susan,
I can't help it I had to giggle when I read your email - first line you whine about most other readers that do not immediately jump to ratings and give you 10 stars, then you write exclusively about your nics and superb stories and what not ...
Did you actually read my email? As opposed to just asking a secretary to press the "automatic answer to horny men's emails" button? Are you really interested in what I think about your big tits? Or do you want to write a story for me for "a small fee"?
Do not treat your (not anymore) loyal readers like this
Go_go_goover 5 years agoLove how you don't just take us on a journey of the senses, but a journey through their minds.
gperry2843over 5 years agoI of course gave you 5 stars. I don't see a way to post private comments so this one had to be made public.
Dad?
ROBERTODAVOalmost 6 years agoYou say that I did not bother to vote for your recent story. This was because my response to your work was ambiguous. I readily give you a five for your bold, incisive, no holds barred writing style. But I give you a minus five for your idea that a woman needs a violent physical and psychological assault on her person in order to have a full sexual arousal: "to treat a woman with sexual abuse by slapping her around."
I might not live long enough to read all your 2200 stories and 200 poems.I also have my own stories and poems to write. So my time is limited!
But at least I am prepared to read and comment on your work. But you cannot expect me to like all your stories. At times I will be as a gadfly ready to sting your shapely bottom.
Considering the fact that only 2 people out of 6328 people as of today have bothered to comment on your story, I don't think you should casually dismiss me as a sort of naughty boy who was rude to his teacher. Otherwise I might turn into a very bad man.
You might understand that my comment was not altogether negative and so did show some understanding of your work.
Best wishes,
Robert Davidson. (real name)
SusanJillParkeralmost 6 years agoAuthorYou realize, of course, Roberto, that I write fiction.
Do you understand what fiction is compared to non-fiction, Roberto? Nod your head so that I know that you understand.
You realize, of course, that Literotica is not a dating site. Correct? Do you get that, Roberto?
You realize, of course, that I'm not looking for a good man, a bad man, or any man, and especially not you. I just wrote a story for your reading enjoyment.
Just so that you understand, this was just a story, that's it, and that's all. Even though much of it is taken from my tragic life, what I wrote is not real but make believe.
By the way, did you vote? Chances are you didn't vote. Judging by your comment, if you did vote, you gave me a bashing 1 vote for all the hard work I did in writing this story.
Do you have any idea, Roberto, what it takes to write a story, a free story, for you to read and bash with your comment and then, not even receive a lousy vote from you?
Do you understand to write a story for you to read for free I must create, develop, write, read, edit, rewrite, reread, and reedit the story over and again for tens of hours for you to make a stupid comment and then not even vote.
"Thanks for nothing Roberto. Now, do me a favor and go away."
Furthermore, do me a favor and don't read any of my stories. Obviously, you don't understand my writing. Obviously, there's something wrong with you.
By the way, as long as I'm holding my Smith and Wesson, and have big Big Louie casting his big shadow over me with Vito, Guido, and Freddie in the background, I fear no man, especially not you.
Susan Jill Parker (real name)
