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Sunnet sighed. She had no secrets, and no reason to lie. So she took a deep breath and was prepared to tell the truth.
So ends chapter eight. Sorry it wasn't sexy and fun. Hopefully things will lighten up soon. I certainly hope you enjoyed the story. Chapter nine will be written shortly. Please vote and share your thoughts.
- COMMENTS
Dutchgirl82almost 10 years agoI'm sorry, this story has lost me as a reader. I have read very good chapters from you, but ch 7 and 8 were far below par. Consistency was lower, characters changed to fast without explained reasons, language editing wasn't as good (for instance I was annoyed by the many times you used 'member' in different meanings short after eachother: a finger, a penis, a packmate, a human community-member, it's confusing) and somehow it was like you gave less care to the writing and dialogue.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoNow he wants to be a dad, really. Lionel didn't think about that kid before, not buying it now. Wish he could have survived, then we'd see what kind of dad he would be. Not the best I'm guessing.
ariesgirlabout 10 years agoI'm still trying to understand why Sunnet acts like she doesn't like Jacob. She need to stop playing and go after her man. Jacob need to make his intentions known too.
