Thanks to all who have written and offered comments; both complimentary and those pointing out areas that need improvement. I really believe that my writing has improved because of the readers at Literotica who took the time to write.
Ironically, because I have learned to review my work with a more critical eye, it takes longer to get the chapters just right and then post them.
There's always room for improvement, so send me an email and don't forget to vote.
I must first apologise for the long break in my story. I lost someone very dear to me and, for a while, nothing seemed important. Keith, and others, helped me get myself back together.
I wasn't sure I would finish my story, but I have healed emotionally to the point that I can write again. I can't promise the chapters will be posted as fast as I did in the past, but, with your encouragement, I will finish the story.
Thanks you all for your patience and kinds words during my absence.
Dani
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