Thanks to everyone who have kindly read, voted and commented. Do keep the feedback coming! I'd love to hear your thoughts, whether you liked it, hated it, or felt it needed a little bit of futzing.
A slightly retouched version of Axiom is now available as a pdf download on Scribd, written under the name Penelope Elle.
http://www.scribd.com/doc/112671653/Axiom
25/2/2013
Writing sex was always a huge challenge for me, and the main reason I started posting on Lit was to try to break out of my comfort zone and wade into foreign ground, exploring my writing capacities. That, and life's continuous curveballs leave me with little time to experiment, but I'm definitely still trying. 'Til then, stay titillated, people.
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