I welcome feedback. I'm not a big believer in serial stories. I try to write with a certain arc that begins with one character being surprised about a situation, develops a seductive tension, and ends with a memorable sexual encounter. Along the way, I may try to bring in other sexual experiences to whet the reader's appetite. As with many writers here, there are certain elements that keep cropping up. I think I am least successful when I try to add elements that I think readers want. When reading erotica here I really want to believe they are true stories, but I'm sure most is fictional, no matter how much they are based on real events. I wrote this reply to a recent comment. Thought I'd remove it from the comments to here: I don't usually respond, but as to the first comment on this story, I have to agree with you. It would have been better in any of the ways you describe. In this one case, I wanted to try something a bit different for me and decided not to let my imagination run away from me. If it suggests more, then I am just as pleased. Perhaps, there is another longer tale to tell. I did get an appreciative feedback mailed to me already. | 
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