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by Anonymous03/13/09

ortografia

Muchos errores pej "fatima o javiera" y mala traduccion al español

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by fatbird2000612/16/10

a small correction and the story will become perfect

I liked your story very much.
That is the kind of situation I would like to live, if I had a sister.
Nevertheless, I think you should edit the story and correct the sister's name.
She is Fátima the most part of the time, but other times is Javiera. I think you decided to change the name and forgot to replace all Javieras by Fatimas.
If you correct it, the sory will become perfect.
I gave you 4 only stars, for that reason :-)

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by tonyafelly06/07/12

me encantó la historia

pero me confundía, pues a veces el le llamaba javiera y otras veces fátima. pero el amor entre hermanos me fa-sci-na, quiero mas y mas, mmmm

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by maxsteele06/03/15

Where is English version of this story?

I see you posted the Spanish version of this story. But where is the English version for us who don't understand Spanish? Could you post the English version please.

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