por PrairiePirate
WOW! great story. I speak a kinda lot of spanish (i have to stop saying "a little bit"... I'm spanish 3 material) and I've been trying to expand my vocab & fluency with readings... ok, so this wasn't exactly the plan, I was messing around here and saw the language link... hey, i did expand my vocabulary! : ) Anyway, it took about four hours, an online translator, and everything I know about spanish to decode the translation, but it was worth it (at least by my twisted standards...). Anyway, I wanted to say that I really liked it! I'm pretty sure it was better than any of the english stories I've read on here- this had really good word choice, good control over the reader's emotions.
(I would have posted in spanish but I'm REALLY tired)
Looking forward to reading more of your work (but maybe not at 4 am)
Que rica historia!!!!!!! Me tuviste caliente todo el tiempo!!!! De Verdad Que delicia de historia!!!!