by scheherazade_79
outrageous sense of humour and of the ridiculous would come good eventually. Hilarious, had me giggling from the first verse. We want MORE!! Humour is so good for the feel-good factor. Auntie Mat.
Very tongue-in-cheek and light-hearted, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks for the smiles!
Great job, Scheh. The part about the upturned thumb was priceless. I'm still giggling. :)
Seriously, you are awesome! I laughed my ass off. I usually avoid poetry because I just don't get it, but this was clever and just dirty enough for someone like me to understand and appreciate.
Thanks,
...S-Des
I laughed so hard the neighbor called to see what was funny. She loved it too!
I enjoyed this. You proved that white stilettos are not just for Essex girls but for demanding women anywhere...
Og
PRICELESS. Utterly wonderful Zade. Pure humour to the last letter!!
N
"Genre-buster" not really the correct term, it's more of a merging of erotic poetry with that interesting class of clever poems about prosaic subjects. This genre has a long and honored place in the canons of literature, and some of its products are much beloved. Our Zade has the potential to make a lasting contribution, and may one day pen one of those beloved classics. (Which will allow future schoolchildren forced to read it to snicker as they question teacher about other entries in this writer's body of work. ;-) )