by Scintillating
cool exercize! Knowing this, I read it again with a new appreciation.
The feeling I felt when reading this was if it were me there, in your place. Yes, just perfectly placed on paper the feelings between what is supposed to be, what is and the translation that flows out.
Thank you.
As a musician I know what you feel with the cascade of sounds that flow between the heart and the hands. I also know the emotions that come and go with the notes that are deciphered by your fingers and sent to your soul. You did a very good job of describing what most have only tried to. Thank you for the inspiration. You make me want to play.
Excellently done exercise
Creating in the reader's mind
The feel of the music
As though it's playing in the background
While the reader follows along.
Even as a long time jazzbo I still marvel that a melody that gets played in the brain ~ then finds it's way down to the neck of my guitar ~ transmitted by my fingers into the void.