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by MercyMia

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Sexual Tension in the Details

The language is strong and direct, very compatible with the action in the poem. It seems like the last stanza is missing a few words, though. Enjoyed it. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Mia...

Have mercy on me... ;)

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