by Tzara
Now <I>that</I> I like! Perhaps we need for a demonstration in church this Easter Sunday of the holy art of speaking in tongues.
I just love a man who can speak in tongues. The longer and more often, the better. It's nice being the focus of his attention!!
Simple and succinct, but with strong images that paint the story. I love this sort of erotica, that conveys mood and plot without any explicit language. It makes for a stronger poem, imo. And this is also a very tender one. Thanks for the read!
Angeline
...now there's a word ya don't use everyday (grin'n) I enjoyed your witty word play (~_~)
excellent work and from a poet who says he doesnt convey emotion well....
loved it!!
NJ
"Speech is not everything."
what an important moment, when one realizes that not everyone should be everything, thank you for this perspective, it is one that will linger and sink in.... you, the poet for those without the words to say these things, beautiful
I agree with you and anna,
'Speech is not everything.'
The ability to convey that with words is rather impressive.
Evocative, erotic, many-layered even in its brevity, witty, wonderful.
This one I'll come back to again and again. It's got under my skin. (I'm bummed though - I hit a 4 instead of a 5 as I meant to do... really sorry!)
This is absolute perfection. Subtle and evocative. Made me close my eyes and exhale. And then read it again. And again. Very, very lovely.