All Comments on 'A Changed Life Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Superb

Surperb writing as always. Loving and romantic. Really love this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Crescendo!

Marvelous piece of work. What a way to go. Cant wait for the conclusion... Cat (Lol Calit69 - it is not about Durban being awake before Cape Town. Here we work hard before we party hard. Mwah!)

punkin1077punkin1077about 15 years ago
wow

just wow...i can't even think of anything else to say...it was just wow...wonderful:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Two days???? I have to wait at least another two days for the next installment!!!! Forgive me of my rude impatience but this is just too good to stop!!! It's like one of those books you just can't seem to put down. Your writing is simply spectacular, and your ability to convey emotions with the simplest of descriptions is nothing short of amazing. Thank you for this story.

PiaraqPiaraqabout 15 years ago
awesome

love every word. two days is a long long time....

Calit69Calit69about 15 years ago
Great

Again you have maintained and heightened the tension in a most romantic manner. Makes for a refreshing change So close to finishing line cant afford to stumble although it would make a very cruel twist to the story. Keep it up Most enjoyable (Cape Town please, work only starts at 0900 and then one has to pay homage to the mountain at some stage during the day. Party hard in CT been a number of years- remember very good times

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
GREAT STORY!!!!

The story is so sweet. I am wanting to see them together. Such a perfect romance.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Life Changes

This fabulous, truly romantic story builds toward climax(es). The tantalizing, x-rated-lustful thoughts are shared by both men in the same way. The one doesn't want just to get laid, but to have a lifelong permanent relationship with the man he adores. The other tells himself his desperate need stems not from his cock, but from his heart and head. So they arrive at the ultimate declaration of love at the same moment. I love the subtle sexual psychology the author gently develops.

Kazehana552Kazehana552over 13 years ago

The Plot thickens!! lol I love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
pull your finger out.?

talk about drag it out.? get em fucked and move on.? its like pulling teeth. i love a good love story.? but at this rate, they will be retired by the time you get round to it.?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
It's called anticipation...

Pacing is just fine. I love the story and the way you are telling it.

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