All Comments on 'A Ghost of a Chance'

This was the most erotic story i have ever seen..it got me realllly hot and i loved it...keep up the good work!

I'm sorry, but this story wasn't written well. The paragraphs didn't flow and some of the content didn'nt make sense.

Also, you mentioned the older sister was 19 and that her parents divorced when she was 18. Suddenly you mention the "younger" sister (but without a legal adult age) being at the haunted house as well.

What gives?

Really good story, some of the writing could do with some touching up, but as far as underage goes.."Kim at 18 was a spectacle to behold. " <--i think that pretty clearly states the younger sister as 18years old..

Keep up the good work!

I would like to know more about Kim. We left kim in a position there and didn't finish the story on her.

But as far as the story all around goes, I love it. Got me going.

I would have rated higher...but as previous comment stated...there were a couple of areas left dangling...however...the story content is highly stimulating and has potential with further development...

made me hot this is one of my personal favorite fantasys :)

xoxox

kathyk20@aol.com

First, some of your pronouns are really confusing. Second, please continue it, the current ending is just too damned much of a cliffhanger and I can't help but feel like there's something more important to happen. All else aside, I really did love it. It's very well written, mildly suspensful, and the statue scene was fucking awsome(though it ended far too prematurely). I really do hope you continue to work on this one. Fix some of the pronouns and continue with the story. I know there's gotta be more.

Still waiting - you promised more! And, yes. I DID vote for your story.

You're story made me wanna orgasism so badly. A friend of mine in high school told me bout literotica and the stories here and it was very nice! I do not masturbate like the girl in the story also and hope if I ever come into a ghost house that I get that kinda experience. Please write more like this.

I read stories in literotica all the time and this story really got me wet. It was one of the best Ive read so far.

wow. you have to wright more. this realy got me worked up.

Wow! this was an amazing story. It really got me aroused. Ignore the idiot who gave you 0%, as the rest of all enjoyed it. I hope you write a part 2 and 3 to this saga.

Please, please, please continue this story.

Please write another part! Lots of us want more - you can't leave it like that.

We are all waiting for you to continue this story!

This story is awesome. Something I wouldn't have thought I would like, but my husband sent it to me and it just took excitement to a new level. I hope you plan to write more. This is something I would read the sequal to.

I came twice with juss that 1 great story, goddamn man, I jacked off so damn hard.

totally hot! I'm dripping wet. it really turned me on! this was a whole new level of excitement for me.

I really hope you write a 2nd part. You should of kept it going instead of having an ending like that.

A little confusing at times but absolutely unbelievable. I was impressed with your imagination. Great job.

Awesome story. Really original, and very erotic. It would be great to have a follow-up story to this. For instance, a continuation of the scene with Kimmy? Perhaps you could conclude it with the Mother returning for Kimmy, but nobody comes out the house, so she has to go inside and also meets the ghost... leading to reuniting with Don?

Awesome plot, so many possibilities from where it left off... I would LOVE to read a part 2!

you've gotta write more! This story was amazing. It made me so wet and horny, I had to masterbate! I came like I've never came before! Just thinking about this story turns me on again. more please!

I wish you would continue this story because it left me wet and wanting to read more. You got talent and should write more-- Lots more.

god that was great,i hope u write more,i came 3 times

IM so fuckin horny im gunna go masturbate right now

Dude man i agree with the others, this story seems like the start of something bigger. AD TO it PLZ!!!

I can't believe the author did'nt write more about this pussy hungry ghost; My dick is still throbbing.......

I read it out loud to my husband "sexy storytime" wow did it get us totally worked up we tried a couple things we read in the story made for a great night, we will continue sexy storytime" Thank you for your website, helps keep spice in the bedroom

Fantasticly hot, I hope to read more about this house and horny ghost.. I have lived in a house that was haunted, never had that kind of thing happen.. But did have some wacked out stuff go on.. Our basement you could feel that there was someone or thing there with you. I really loved this story and will look for more of your work..

By the way I'm Passionsmoment

new to this club.

my pussy is dripping wet.i got out my toy vibrater and fucked my self all night long while reading your story over and over.please write more!

OH MY GOD, this is one of the best stories I've ever read on here. so much so that I actually remembered it after a few years and came back to read it again and masturbate, it was fantastic!!!

i fired so much cum it is unbelievable please mail me a sequel

damonlbp@hotmail.co.uk

I just loved the Ghost "raping" both sisters.....I want more of the Ghost Rapist including his human life

more! more! more! i want more! i luv'd it

unbelievably erotic!! i had to stop half way through the story to get a toy and bang an orgasm out of me. then when i came back to finish the story i came again. Thank you for such an awesome thrill ride. very visual and kept my attention throughout. i will agree that there needs to be more. keep up the great work!!

This is the best ghost story ever!

Keep it up! (no pun intended!)

O man. I so wanted more. Totally loved it. I want one of those statues.

A wonderful story very well written only wish there were more chapters.

Hope Guy doe's not keep us waiting.

One of the comments ( what gives ) You know the saying

you can please some of the people most of the time,

but you cannot please all the people all the time.

So instead of Nit-picking just enjoy it for what it is FUN.

What happen to the mother?

i know this is 12 years old plus but since you're still active on this site, and this is such a great story. please let us have some more chapters since there is so much you can do with this. and so much the girls could learn from the master of the house.

Well written I loved it it was hot and stimulating in all the right ways

Loved this story but want a follow up with sister

Would love to see more of this story.