All Comments on 'A Night To Remember'

you go girl!!!! please write more! this was so great!

Whats in the book? Please continue this story. I have to know what happens next!

I started reading this, and was completely lost! I am eager to read more. Have you thought of writing novels? You have a great flow with words.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!! Ok I have to know how this ends please, please

At very long last, the sequel is written! It's called "Another Night to Remember". I don't know how to post links here, but this is the URL.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159560

I'm just trying to notify as many people as possible that the sequel is at long last done ...

This story combines great descriptions of the characters and events with enticing glimpses of the nature of the character and the possiblity of a continuing plot. I enjoyed the sensuality (as well as sexuality) of their interaction - plenty of naked lust, but more than that as well, and a good job at building a sympathetic and interesting non-human character. Davinci seems quite delicious, and I hope that we hear more of him.

incredible story! i can't wait to read more! it is refreshing to see the sequence of events... the words captured me and i couldn't wait to read more! very sensual story. keep up the excellent work. please write more!

I have never voted for anything on here before but ur story was so good i could stop myself please write more

That story was subperb! Write more! MORE!

This is a wonderfully powerful story, you did a great job! I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter! :D

You must continue! I'll absolutely die if you don't!

This was very well written and very intreguing.

LOVED it..............very well done

You can't leave it hanging like that!! The wait is going to kill me!! Hurry type quickly so I can find out what's going to happen next!! Bravo...the beginning was awesome.

type more please...loved it..very well written...thanks for a good read

I truly enjoyed your story - i thought it was exciting and very erotic. Great Job - looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks

The story draws you in. I completely expected it to continue. I can't wait for the next CHAPTERS to come!!! Please write quickly, and bravo on the first chapter. It was very well done!

Your descriptions of both the settings and actions were phenomenal, but the spoken parts could use a little refinement. Overall I was pretty impressed with your story, as describing in more detail is someting I myself have been working on, but a last-minute proof read would benefit you greatly.

-Sara

This is one of the best stories I have ever read I cant wait to find out what happens next. Nice job on this story.

I really enjoyed reading your work, probably one of the best i've read so far! I am very much looking forward for more!

one of the best i've read. very intense and erotic. please write more

Great Story, nice lead in, I totally enjoyed it. I look forward future chapters on this Jazzy Tale.

Thoroughly enjoyed every word from start to finish.Had me almost believing vamps are real.I definetly wish men like him were.Thanks for the dream.

I couldn't stop reading...your story drew me in. Please add to this entry.

You should write chapter stories. Your Good!

Thanks!

Make more please

Please....this needs more!!

I can't wait to see more of this tale.. Very well done.

I can't wait to read more of this story, there is soo much passion between the characters. Please hurry with the next chapter.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I've adored this story for years... but I couldn't find it! Now that I've rediscovered it, it's going into my list of favorites so that I may re-read it again and again and again!!!!! It is fantastic, thank you! :)

this was really good. i cant wait to read what happens next!!

NEVER EXPECTED THAT. I LOVE HOW THE WHOLE STORY LINE IS.

PLEASE WRITE MORE

I'D LIKE TO SEE THE OUTCOME

A different take on the vampire story...I loved it! Please do write more!

I loved this I cant wait until you continue this story.

Dnt keep us waiting to long story was wonderful

I like where you are coming from, please continue. I believe you have a decent set of rules or ideas for his condition or race. this and his ideology would make a great story. Also the one idea I think is a great story line and possibly world. Please continue on this world/story, I want to see where it goes. you seem to have an eazy style, I am impressed and intrigued. Please continue!