by PDumbledore
I wonder if this could evolve into a fantasy tale .. continuing along the line of them spending more and more time in mother natures company and becomeing one with it .. sort of thing. anyway just an idea .
I enjoyed it greatly.
This has to be one of your best, if not the best. I also think that you should turn this into a fantasy type story.
The setting is perfect for a deep and meaningful relationship between this couple to be developed. How about it?
I did notice a few errors in spelling but not enough to significantly disrupt the story line. Wonderfull story.
This was very well done. It just stayed so quiet and peaceful. It brought back memories of backpacking. Thank you.