All Comments on 'Being Downsized'

Scorpio, as I have said in the past, you honour us with yet another glimpse of you brilliance! You have treated your loyal readers to yet another fine tale of rekindled love and hope. Your characters are so live and real and the plot, although sombre in parts, is truly heart warming. I’m looking forward to more adventures of Monica and our nameless hero. A true fan, Pete.

Scorpio,

I really feel that this one belongs in Erotic Couplings or Romance not BDSM. There was so little of commanding and it was really minor, although a major part of his attitude. I wonder what caused that? You really could expand this one and I think most of us would enjoy it. You are a very talented writer. I have read all your stories so far and will continue to read them because I like your style. Thanks for another good one.

great story and keep writing.here lateiy all you get on this site is gay or lesbian stories.give us more of your stories.

who cares if some of you think this story is in the wrong place. It's an outstanding piece of work and should be judged as that and not for not being where you think it should be. get a life.

Once in a while a story manages to ring a bell when you read it. This was such a story. I found it endearing, heartwarming and in spots sweetly sexy. I loved reading about the main character's wandering in the RV, and joined in a virtual 'ride along.' It's wonderful, even in a fantasy story when the characters can relate so well to each other. I did enjoy this.

Were there spots I didn't particularily care for? Sure - but that's my problem - not the Authors. Well Written!

I really enjoyed this story!

Boyd

I really enjoyed this and it is more D/s than B/D but it is a good story. Look forward to seeing where their relationship goes and how far do they explore their limits.

Great story! Romance and mystery (about the details of past loves abd tragedies), joy of discovery and commitment. Great. Thanks

as a sub beginning to discover more and more about D/s and BDSM, your story shows a gentle approach to those of us who are perhaps overanxious or apprehensive into submitting to the One we wish to please. You depiction of Monica taking her time to think about Nick's offer, was one of clear rationale and desire. Please write Part 2, Scorpio44, Sir.

I fell in love with the subtle way that Monica fit in with the narrator's commands and, more pertinent, his needs. It makes the writing sophisticated in a way most erotic stories are not. I get the sense that these are the types of characters that feel like they are coming home when the find each other, like Vonnegut's duprass or like souls from past lives. I was lukewarm about it immediately after I read it, but have been thinking about it off and on for over a week now, and that, to me, is what reading is for.

Thanks

The writer is very gifted. His stories are Steamily Erotic

but not in the usual and boring sense. His characters are

alive and responsive and thinking! His talents as a writer

bring the reader "inside" the relationship and the action!

BRAVO!!

I can see where Nicks marriage went to he was to demaanding in his marriage that s probably why his marriage got downsized and if monica doesnt start telling Nick to downsizing his demands his relationship might go down the tubes or drains in this case.

Atlanta,Ga

EXTREMELY well written by someone who TRULY understands that the lifestyle is NOT about treating your Woman like crap or a piece of meat to be abused. It is about helping each other reach your peaks. SUPER! Master Samurai

Another excellent story from a gifted writer. Easy pace with a great flow. A lack of spelling and grammar mistakes make this easy to read.

Part 2?

Started out great, right up to the part when the trucker was involved. Don’t get why you want to get anyone else involved in the fantasy! Sick fuck! Was going to read. Not now!🤮

Not bad, 4/5

See what the next chapter brings if he shares her that’s it for me. D/s relationships are all about trust once that trust is breached and it becomes the abuse of sharing no more story.

Some of your readers seem to be looking for reality or make comments about comparing your stories to their reality. 1) I get enough reality away from this computer & 2) So far, I'm enjoying your stories for what they are. Oh Yeah! 3) If I want to have complicated relationships, I seem, unfortunately, to be able to attract them without even trying ! THANKS !

As with the other writings of yours, I am thoroughly enjoying them. They are a GREAT escape from my reality.

THANK YOU !