All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 16'

This story continues to be nice work. Keep writing!

-- KK in Texas

more chapters are we going to have to wait before you dump the pig Martin? Otherwise, good writing, keep it up.

I give up this story is going nowhere fast. There are to many short chapters with a very little changing between the chapters. At this rate the main characters will both be in a seniors home by time they finally have sex. The author needs to learn that the lead up to the climax or conflict in a story can only be drawn out just so far before readers give up and find something else to read. I do like the premise of the story but it’s way to slow to keep readers.