All Comments on 'Bus Stop'

by Dakota_North

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Doc701Doc701about 19 years ago
delightful

I find it difficult to believe that you are as young as you say but, you have a beautiful mind. That nieghborhood sounds great and justice certainly was prevailing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

The story was absolutely wonderful as it got better and better with each experience with each woman. Great job I was rock hard from beginning to end…

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
OhMiGawd

So hot... From Nicki to Sheri to Rosemarie, I love how it just kept getting better and better, without getting repeatitive. I love this story, and you are truly a fantasticly hot writer!

gentilitygentilityover 15 years ago
great as usual

so well written and erotic as hell. But did you HAVE to include that anal bit at the end? It was good enough without the overkill.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot fucking story

Great hot story and I would bet we would like to be part of it.

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