All Comments on 'Christmas Wish'

If you enjoy massive cocks, DD boobs, and everyone just falls into bed like magic, this fairly well written story is for you.

This is the best story I have ever read at this site and it has the perfect happy ending!

i just finished reading the christmas wish stories, and i was wondering if you ever thought of selling your stories to anime people.  your characters and plot would fit well into an anime movie or miniseries.  like the focus you used on the girls eyes, the betrayals, and silent retribution all made me think of the characters as animated but not cartoony.  thank you for thinking out a story to write, it was very enjoyable to read

wow, that really got me going! I loved the underlying plot, and the ending, the only way it could have been better is with an orgy at the very end when Erin came back, but that's a good opening scene for a sequel. BTW, write one of them.

wow this was one amazing story I could never turn away.... it has great detail i like that!

It's an interesting premise, but be careful because your characters are starting to wander into some serious Mary Sue territory.

Pretty good, but very sloppy English.

If this tale of sex and a deep love doesn't win you an award then nothing will.

You have to finish this story!!!

Where is part 2 ?