All Comments on 'Cum Undone'

awsome sexy and stuff like it lot made me long white cum out of me bye

Eh? How could you end it just like that? I like this fic, but I think you need a part 3.

I loved it - evry stroke of this original new encounter. I bet so many of us are bi-curious and this story took me into that world just as if I was there myself. In fact .. all three of us us came in gushes. I don't think that there should be a third part - leave it at that truly exciting moment and leave us all to pomder what happened next.

If this really is your first gay story--I can't wait for the second. So real, so hot. I think all guys are bi-curious if they are sexual at all. And I've had experiences similar to your story. Hope the office presentation went well. lol

THIS STORY WAS ONE OF THE BEST I READ. THE STORY WAS WRITTEN IN A WAY THAT JUT DIDN' JUMP IN THE SEX. IT MADE IT WAY SLOWLY SO I COULD GFEEL THE TENSION IN MY BALL. IT MADE MY DICK GET HARD. KEEP IT CUMMING.

you gotta tell us what happened next.... part two please!!!

God I loved!! <3

it felt so real reading it...

please PLEASE write the continuation of this *adds to fav list*

More..

wish I had straight pal like mark...

I must be bi or IF I keep comin here I will be bi or gay

my panties are loaded

I love this bi story and hope it willnot be a onenighter only. My cock was rock hard and pumping away while reading this story.....MORE

really hot and horny! is there additional story? hehe!

that was a great story but would more.. like did they hook again...

This was a great story. A continuation would be nice to read.

I like. Its a sweet story and your a good writer.

fuck that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm a yaoi otoku (Male on Male freek) and I can't get enough two thumbs way way way way way way way way way up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

o my god that was fucking hot a continuation would b great

Great story, a fantasy of mine.

I would like to hear more about how this develops.

I absolutely loves it. More of these two please!

This is a good story. I'd love to see where it goes, but i see you wrote this a really long time ago.

I really dont want their story to end yet! Lol

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