All Comments on 'Discovering Daddy Ch. 03'

I really like this one..hope you continue with this story..

One of the best stories I have ever read!! the characterization was excellent, the tension just right. And seamlessly professional. Well done!!

Possibly the most erotic and sensuous story ever posted - fantastic and cannot wait for the next instalment. Many thanks!

"...consumed in the realization of her immoral ardor."

Whew! Gotta cool down a bit now. So well written on so many levels.

Guess I'm going to have to read ALL of your writings to date just to see what I've been missing.

A great read,well thought out and a delight to get involved in.

You know how much I love you Daddy/girl stories and this one is probably the best one you;ve submitted. I like that you took time to develop the plot and I like the suspense you created - the first two days I was waiting impatiently for some good Daddy sex and, man oh man did you deliver.

So when's the next one?

newflowers ;)

This story really was an excellent read from start to finish. Your character development was flawless and entirely consistent. I also commend you for writing a story that flowed easily from chapter to chapter!

Keep writing.

John

Damn! Horny dad plus two incredibly sexy young daughters equal no damn control at all! He just folded like a cheap suit...Men are such sluts...Daddy or not...Great one Jim.

Well not bloody actually, but talk about development (the girls at least), and tension.... building..... building.....building.....gah!

Great, fantastic.

this story is wicked, sexy, super hot.. i think your a fabulous writer.. dont EVER stop!!!!!!! i love it!!!

I found this story on my dad's computer History. It was as though all of my fantasies were realized in this one story. It made me feel that I should not give up hope. Nan

Characterization, Tension, Plot, eroticism, sexiness.. Hell... That was one masterful piece of writing!! Gotta check out your other stuff now....

Once again you have excelled!

Great build up - amazing conclusion! Keep it up!

This is a tight bit of writing. It balances the sex with the plot and characterisation well, and the story moves at a brisk clip. Thoroughly enjoyable.

This has been one of the best tales I have read on this site. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your stories.

this is the best incest story i've ever read, i am at a loss of words to describe its greatness.....

This story is amazing, I just could not stop reading,

congratulations on a wonderful job.

Thank you

i could not stop reading this story! truly amazing; great work.

Either the best, or the second best story I've read on this site! This definatley should have won first place!!!

The writing sytle is superb! The girls are so lovable. Every detail was vivid and the action was hot. The dialogue is fantastic, too, very fun to read.

Fantastic story,definitely the best i can remember reading on here,excellent characterisation,and hot as hell,pure sexyness and a great story.Keep it up!

I read all three chapters. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. An amazingly erotic story that has focus and moves along nicely. The sex scenes are nicely written without being crass or overly detailed.

Mesmerising, exciting, erotic and sensuous! I have never read a story that described the sensuality between two people so beautifully, with such delicacy and sensitivity. This story is so much better than both the stories that won first & second prize - they were so mediocre compared to this one. Thank you for a delightful read.

An excellent story, well written and with a minimum of typos and spelling errors, especially the silly ones. Please can we have more in the same style!

Nicely written. I loved it and everyone thats reads it should also.

OLD STYLE, 7 PETTICOAT ROMANCE AND LOVE STORY FULL OF PICTURES, LIKE WATCHING A MOVIE(EVERY FRAME A TREAT). NO SLAM/BAM HERE BUT A TALE WELL TOLD, A FULL MEAL, WHERE EVERY BITE SAYS BRAVO ABOUT THE COOKS CRAFT. THANKS

Good story. Bravo. Not many typos, and the story moved along really well. I like how there is a whole side-story with Mr. Paddington just for added intrest. I hope him and Chloe are very happy together.

Great story! Unique writing style, great description, everything. The best story I've read. Well done.

Fair play there mate. Well crafted, built, and executed. This series, along with the others I am now reading, offer not just erotic excitment, but actual thought and imagination of the story and characters as well. I truly see the descriptions, hear the 'mewls', and even smell the girly scents filling my screen. Brav-fucking-OOOOOO!

The comments of "Bad Arse" at the top of the page mirror what I was going to say. I look forward to more stories in the future

Great _story_! Not just sex, but the entire build up, fleshing out each character, etc, was really well done. I found myself reading part 3 even though I'd cum and lost my sexual need near the end of part 2. I love to seduction by the older sister, the wavering desire of the younger drawing her into the lesbian incest.

Oh yea, I'm getting hard again just thinking about it.

Kept me entertained. I laughed and came. Good Work!!!

Well crafted, superb storyline, One of the best I've ever read.

What a great lead up this story had - and the culmination was brilliant - Valentine's Day for all - keep on writing series like this

very nice mabye just a tad to long but well worth it

mmmm, loved it, especially how the father was dominating in the bedroom. I wish my daddy would fuck me like that.

This RED HOT SEX story plays "All in the Family" all the way. The girls are too horny to be real, but the whole adventure is well-written and works just fine and dandy. Can I play?

In addition to agreeing with all the superlatives my fellow commentators have been raining upon you, I want to say how astonished I am at how wonderfully you, a middle-aged male writer, have managed to give us such a convincing (to me, at least), original and erotically charged story from the point of view of two smart and sophisticated young girl-ladies. Katie's character is superbly developed!

Definitely one of the best stories I've read. Just the way i like it. This is what a real story is supposed to be. NOT the "fuck and run" kind of story.

good job, erotic but down to earth, liked it alot

I've been reading Literotica for close to a year now. This definately tops everything I've read to date!

I used to believe I was hooked on incest stories though I've never been tempted... well tempted but never experienced it myself. I always believed it was the taboo aspect and that I regreted having never indulged in it myself.

Reading all these stories, i have found that it is the difference between public and private personna that turns me on! The bigger the difference, the more turned on I get!

Even though this is a daddy/daughter story, the real turn on for me was the sweetness of the daughters and the sheltering father, turned into sexual animals they ended up being. Big difference!

AND, very hard to establish in short story format. Very well done!

I really liked it - especially liked the build-up between the two sisters ... amazing.

Excellent series! Excellent writing, great build-up between the sisters and Dad had a perfect response: take charge and fuck 'em both silly!

By far one of the hottest stories I have read here, a nice build up that kept my interest, like to see this in a video bet it would sell.

I think it was all well written, but taking into account the series name, there isn't much about daddy !

Nice to see a professional piece of writing on Lit - there are so few of us who take the time and trouble to get the spelling, grammar, story and syntax right. A great piece of work, rockandroller. Ten out of ten, my friend.

my god! i read the entire series and i don't think i've ever cum so hard or so much. i came 5 or 6 times.

I skipped all the sister incest scene, this is called discovering daddy, not my bisexual urges, fuck you and fuck your sister/daughter too if you ever have one

I just came 4 times.. Amazing! Beautifully written! Please write more!!

Great story, you did a great job

The story is so well written, which is not really surprising.. A 'well written' story was in the making after the first few paragraphs...eventhough the results were obvious. That's the challenge. itself.

It is emotionally moving and touching, and the interplay between the sisters --while quite plausible and amusing. Typical big-sister/little sister comradery. This the kind of story that is hard to 'put down'. Interest is maintained throughout. Did I mention the word "SEXY'? Plenty of it ...throughout. An easy read, well worth your time.

I could rave like the others about how hot and naughty the series is but oddly what I liked best was the "after action" report. It didn't stop immediately when a lesser writer might ended the story. It's that attention to "story" that puts this series a cut above almost every other posting (and believe me I've read plenty of them!). Thank you!

Loved it! Just a great story with a light-hearted ending. Loved, for a change, that dad didn't turn into some whiny assed pussy when his daughters threw down the gauntlet like most dads do in these stories before they cave. This felt much more real and importantly, enjoyable! Three cheers!!

This story was great and I must admit will become a guilty pleasure of mine. greqt writing style i felt like I was there a fly on the wall.well done

But I have to bow to your mastery. This is fucking awesome.

This was panties wet hot

Incredible three-part story, with much more exciting buildup than i’d anticipated.

Best aspects are Katie’s inner musings, fantasies, and reflections. Realistic, sexy details. And what a Valentines Day present for them all.

Destined to be a classic. Great story, great writer!

Never thought you could top "My Daughter's Garter Belt" but I think this tale is even better!

The ending ruined the entire series. Don't speak of love, always, forever, unless you mean it.