by BarbraNovac
it was a good story but rushed....i know all about him but i know little about her. What does she do for work? does she live with her friend? i like the story but you could have added more about her and i'd love to see if this works out for them or if it was just a sexual attraction.
Almost fairy tale quality.
Where the young maiden gets her prince. Sweet with erotic sex. Makes for good reading.
A very vivid and explicit sex scene, and her shyness made the whole picture that the author painted in my mind very real.
Thanks
this was a really nice story and i'm so happy for Jemma. however could u pleas add an epilogue?