All Comments on 'Drifting'

I stayed up for hours reading these stories...wonderfully written, I was sucked into all the characters and found myself disappointed to reach the end. Thanks!! =)

Best. Story. Ever.

Would be better if there was more love than just a series of sex. My personal opinion is that most women dont need stone butch, if they want all the roughness and domination, they would go for men instead. This is 21st century and women dont like being controlled, so yep, stone butches need to learn.

I'm alex and a butch too btw. (:

One of the best I've read and a great pity the author doesn't seem to want anything more to do with Literotica.

Wonderful story but you so-called lesbians are borderline comedic with your desperate attempts to make all these asexual women, "strong." Especially with all the fake dicks flying around the.

If you're really a strong woman you'd do what you want with a strong man. That's what full, healthy strong women do. Most of you all are just scared of being a woman. Let that estrogen flow girls. Stop being so scared of yourself and Life overall.

Pure fantasy-land but that's what literotica is, isn't it??

first, to the people commenting on here that claim you need men if you like strap-ons, well. you don't know what you're talking about. I personally don't prefer them, but some people like strap-ons and exclusively like women.. butches, AGs, studs, stone butch.. you can't judge unless you're that person.. so stop trying to invalidate people.

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second, I loved this story. while I definitely had a few issues, they're not the point right now. I would've liked to see this as a series, but in a way it was. but I like that you had butches and femmes and in between; twosomes & threesomes & foursomes, oh my!; that beth sought happiness after marlo; rita finding someone who wasn't cheating on her.. the list goes on.

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third, unfortunately, I didn't like the ending. I mean, it was good, but it felt abrupt after all of the build up..

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in the end, this is closer to what I'd like to see the L Word ACTUALLY being.

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kudos.

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PLUS. I live in the hudson valley/ulster county.. so it was cool to hear of places which I'm familiar with. I dug that. hehe. :)

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first, to the people commenting on here that claim you need men if you like strap-ons, well. you don't know what you're talking about. I personally don't prefer them, but some people like strap-ons and exclusively like women.. butches, AGs, studs, stone butch.. you can't judge unless you're that person.. so stop trying to invalidate people.

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second, I loved this story. while I definitely had a few issues, they're not the point right now. I would've liked to see this as a series, but in a way it was. but I like that you had butches and femmes and in between; twosomes & threesomes & foursomes, oh my!; that beth sought happiness after marlo; rita finding someone who wasn't cheating on her.. the list goes on.

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third, unfortunately, I didn't like the ending. I mean, it was good, but it felt abrupt after all of the build up..

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in the end, this is closer to what I'd like to see the L Word ACTUALLY being.

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kudos.

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PLUS. I live in the hudson valley/ulster county.. so it was cool to hear of places which I'm familiar with. I dug that. hehe. :)

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I really liked this story. I love the depth of character development and the weaving of all the story lines. My biggest disappointment was that I wanted to know more about Marlo. Why was she that cold and afraid of disappointment and commitment? I can surmise a little, but I would have liked more depth about her. But like I said, awesome, awesome story!

I loved the story ,it made me sad and happy. Please write more

I especially enjoyed how, right at the very beginning, Marlo orders the pretty girl modelling for her out of her clothes before then taking the girl doggy-style with her strap-on! That's always just so incredibly hot!

I much prefer long stories and this tale certainly delivered on that front. Moreover, it was well written throughout. But it was a little too heavy on the sexual permutations and a bit too light on plot. Furthermore, despite various characters declaring love for each other, there was no real sense of love at all, just sex for the sake of it. And finally, none of the characters were really likeable and if at least some of the characters in a story are not likeable, then there's little point to it. The reader just doesn't care about them. I've given five stars for the writing quality but frankly I didn't care for any of the characters---just about all of them deserved to wallow in their misery.

Good story but too many characters to keep track of.

Perhaps the best story in this genre I have read on Lit - wonderful mingling of characters and their stories, excellent, sparing choice of language, the authenticity of experience dripping (a suitable word) from each page. I had to read it in several chunks as I was overtaken by the need and desire to masturbate.

Marco had to remain a sphinx without a riddle. Well written and well observed.