All Comments on 'Fire Ch. 08'

Just when I've given up and virtually lost all hope in keeping with your stories you go and post another mind blowing chapter. Keep it up it seems I'll be waiting all over again! *laughs* go figure!

Wow, you never cease to amaze me. The intensity between thea and jairus is just, woah. Every chapter is worth the wait (: and god the suspense. Keep up the awesome work

Great story and I'm so glad you updated. Keep up the good work.

I had missed this story. Glad that you've updated and that the next shouldn't be to far away. This was excellent.

now I just wished they'd admit it! Great chapter, hope to see another one VERY soon!

Another great chapter. Your writing is incredibly erotic and the characters are well written. I wish I had my own Jairus!!!

I hadn't exactly forgotten this story, but it was great to be reminded! :) Nicely done. You do a good job of portraying Thea's need to do something to save herself instead of running or always relying on Jairus. Jairus' confusion is great, as well. Excellent characters, can't wait for the next part.

reading this again, surely this has to be my favourite ever sex scene. Ugh SO hot.

Fire is right !!....cold shower anyone ? Mixed with a great story so far .Well Done

Excellent story; excellent writing. Are you still with us, Enithermon?