by scriptordelecto
great as usual but really short... please do more justice to our patience... cant wait for the next chapter
Oh my gosh, I've been anxiously waiting and waiting for the next chapter in this series, and you DEFINITELY did not disappoint!! Keep up the fantastic, hot writing--but I beg you, please DON'T take so long with the next chapter!!
~Lex
OMG I love you!!...lol you have finally updated this story and I love it! but please I beg you don't take so long to update it really doesn't do the story justice to take to long in updating..
i've just read all 7 chapters in one sitting and all i wanna say is WHENS THE NEXT CHAPTER coming out? LET A FRIEND KNOW lol awesome story continue soon plz -/mercedes
need to read more please give us more!have just read all chapters and this story is very good am lookin forward to reading more from u!
Luckly I just came accross your stories so I could read them all at once otherwise I would never remember what had happened last.
I just sat here and read all seven chapters. Loved every bit of them and for once after reading someone's stories I have no complaints. Well... *grins* other than the lack of ending to the story. It's June of 2008 and last chapter was dated November of 2007. Awwww come on .... when's the next issue coming out? You ever need help with ideas drop me a PM or email sometime. :D
AMAZING. I loved it. LOVED IT. come to think of it i more than loved it. PLEASE KEEP WRITING! I'm dying for the next chapter! Your one of the most tallented writers on this site. I loved this story, so far it's perfect and i just know it will continue to be perfect because your so talented. PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!! some of the things cale does just makes me melt. I love him!
Your a great Writer. XOXO Luv Ell
I just found this story recently and I love it! I know it's been ages but I really hope you continue with it. It's too good to leave unfinished!
I love you and your writing...
You captivate me with your usage of words.
You are the best...
OMG! This story is amazing! I want my own Cale, I love Alpha males! I need more when is the next instalment.
Keep writing. xxx
Where the hell IS the rest? I see that this story hasn't been touched in 2 years. You haven't written anything in 2 years. I wished I had noticed this before I started reading this story. It's so disappointing to be left hanging.
Oh..Please..where have you gone? This is such a great story!! Come back and finish it, Please!!!
I would really like to know how this end. Please finish this story. I want find out how the story ends. Please finish it.
this is absolutely awesome!
im so caught up in this story; please finish it!!!
Was just getting in to this. Hurry up and write another one. Its good
just to rate it. Very shallow nothing story, a waste of time...................................................
Thanks for writing this. I'm really enjoying it.
If you get the chance, would love to see where you go with this.