Going Feet First Ch. 06

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DarkPulse
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"We're ready to go."

"So this is farewell," Dreek said as she stepped up beside him.

The Private stood up and dusted off his hands as he looked to her. "It is."

"Shame I couldn't have you in my bed one more time," she said in Drow, before pausing a moment to give Galen a chance to think her words over.

He quirked his mouth and furrowed his brow, "I'm sorry, I didn't understand that."

Still holding that mischievous smirk, the Commandant leaned in and said in a low voice. "Next time you find yourself in Faerssune, expect me to be waiting. And Celia or not, expect lots of sex."

A chuckle escaped Felyn as she both heard Dreek's words and witnessed the shocked look on the human's face.

"Safe travels, Lince'sa," the Drow leader said, bowing her head. "May the Darkness conceal your blade."

Nodding his head and trying to stop his face from turning to a tomato color, Galen snapped to attention and gave her a quick, sharp salute before turning and climbing up into the driver's seat of the wagon. With one last wave, he snapped the reins to the horses and got them moving into the tunnel leading out of the city.

"Where to next, Private?" Flak asked from inside the canvas enclosure of the wagon. "It's your ballgame now, I'm just a pitcher."

"Petra?"

Papers rustled in the back, the Neko humming as she sorted through the pages of Pretayus' journal. "Closest Tree Elf is south-east of Atzla. A baron of a mining town who I figure bought several times from Pretayus. After that, we'll be heading... south... A northern city in the mountains."

"Trip through the woods, a baron, and then some traveling, huh?" Flak commented. "Well, shit, here I thought we'd land ourselves in another shit-show."

"Knock on wood, Sergeant," Galen started with a smile. "I'm 101st Airborne. We're born for trouble and when we plan our trips to Hell, we're sure to be going feet first."

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Author's note:

And so concludes the first arc of my story. Thank you for joining me in this tale of mine, I hope you enjoyed immersing yourself in this world as much I enjoyed sharing it with you. It has been a pleasure.

Dark Pulse.

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jtc3247jtc3247about 2 months ago

Please continue this story

Wirefab1Wirefab1about 2 months ago

Hope you continue this story one of the best things I have read

GeorgiaRedeyeGeorgiaRedeye10 months ago

DARKPULSE, if you are still around, I want you to know that this story is, in NO way, trash. Whoever told you that must have been having a bad day. Yes, it would be nice if the story continued and we could share in Galen's adventure as he saves the 4 elves. However, you did end the story at a good point. So many writers on here stop in mid-story and never come back to finish it. So, thank you for providing us with this excellent tale, and for finishing it. Bravo. Now, I'll move on to your other stories, which, hopefully, will be just as good. Thanks again.

TomdullyTomdullyabout 1 year ago

To bad you stopped writing.

MmtggrMmtggrover 1 year ago

I have to be honest with you DarkPulse. I cursed you a few times every time I realized that my alarm was going to go off in a couple of hours for work and I was still completely immersed in your story. To continue being honest, I'll be cursing you more cuz I plan on binge reading the rest of your stuff in short order.

Awesome, awesome entertainment !!

Sincerely, Mmtggr

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