All Comments on 'Helene'

by Kirk482002

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Summer Fun!

Very nice. Could have been longer, but good. Loved Gacie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great job

Very well-written. One small thing, though: it's spelled "Champagne." :)

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Such an accommodating girlfriend, once she discovered her voyeuristic tendencies. A very well thought out and written story with great potential, I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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