All Comments on 'How I Took Him to Bed in My Head'

This is such a well written story. I have always had the look but dont/cant touch fantasy! Well done!

I love watching a women masturbate on video, and it is a fantasy to do IRL. Strange how gf look at me and don't get how hot it could be. This story outlined it wonderfully.

I loved it. Will there be more??? We can only hope!

You've created some serious sexual tension, both in the story and in my pants! Can't wait to read more!

This story has all of the power dynamics of being restrained and pleasured, while the restraints are only psychological. The story walks the beautiful boundary between immense, sensitive pleasure and discipline, with the characters unleashed in their passion... for each other but not with each other. Short, sweet and sultry.

Mmmm...

Intense... sensual...

inviting detail... emotion...

So very much you.

S

Being a voyeur & a lover of a watching a lady masturbate has truly excited me. Arousing & stirring, and when you add that bit of tension this story was not written by an author, but one that has been where the character has been.

One of the best things you've written my darling. J

Great start to your story writing.

Very very good

There is something so erotic about watching self pleasure and she paints such a vivid picture! More pleaSE!

Reading this, with it's detail, and expression, added to your threads, shows a little more of you pearl.- can't wait for another 'slice' of pearl!

Sammy 2006

I loved it all, especially, "My long nipples were erect, chilled by the suspense, their naked vulnerability." Vivid stuff.

This story rocked my socks off!

Thank you for sharing.

Very hot. I love you descriptions of what you are feeling.

I loved the way the imagined man's touch was there throughout, and we knew just how the protagonist was feeling at every moment. Tinglng.

Such a hot story from a Melbourne girl reduces me to a puddle of bodily fluids in Geelong.

Great writing style that gives the reader a great visual. Looking forward to trying this one out on my boyfriend!