All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 04'

Great story. This such a great couple and I am loving that you update the chapters so closely together.

I really like how you've re-done this story.. The first version was really hard to follow, but this is great. Really engaging.

Hunter being a hunter (no pun intended) can understand animals. I love how u inject some humor after the anti-climax and developing more lines to show Mirage's strong yet vunerable side, of undying love and another side of Hunter. You are obviously on the roll here.

This is very sweet, really. I find myself wondering when the other shoe will fall. ;)

Keep up the good work, really am enjoying it alot!

I thoroughly enjoy reading your work, you have lightened my day so much when there is so much stress going on around me. Thank you for sharing your work here!!!!!

Sorry this is anonymous I can't remember my password.

I enjoyed every minute of it. Keep up the good work<p>Loads of love & hugs -- Susan.

Great chapter. PJ xx

I did not comment on the other 3 chapters I read today to save it all till the end. I am loving this new twist and it seems much more intimate. Maybe we will find out where Hunter came from. I just really hope it wasn't Aphrodite. That would be a twist I have read before. Hope to read more from you soon. Have a wonderful day!

I know on one of the chapters of this (Hunter Hunted) you mentioned getting less comments more recently. I'm not sure I've ever left a comment, but I have been following several of your series and enjoying them. I can't pin down why, but at least one recently didn't draw me in the same way, I think it was ASP. This one, however, I'm feeling the characters much more and the tension between them is more volatile but promising in terms of where it can lead.

I'm just lovin' this story. Keep up the great work.

I was a little confused at the switch up but I took the time to sit down and read all four chapters and now I'm back on track.

Even though I don't always comment; I still vote. You have have amazing work; wither it's free or I have to buy it; I would still read your work!

So I like to think there are other people out there like me; while we don't always comment; we always vote!

Honi

I was hoping this would be another in the Hunter series and although it isn't, it's still a good read Interesting storyline.

I have loved every one of your stories. even the ones you have on other sites and or have taken down from here. And as always this is just as great!

Thanks for this story, I was reading the ASP story and was getting confused, but now that you are breaking it up into the different relationships, like you did in the beginning of the series, no further confusion. I love your stories and will continue to follow this series until you complete it. Thanks sooooo much for continuing to write it!

Keep up the good work!

I love the change in approach to this story. While I enjoy all your stories, the new approach is much more your style and the details and development are so good. Please keep them coming!

I don't know who you are but I really needed this tonight & no I can't afford to buy books unless I can resell them. I have 4 small kids and am on my own so I don't usually have time to comment or waste my time scanning for a good read. I came here & this was the first thing I saw Daniellekitten so I knew I wouldn't be disappointed and as usual with your work I wasn't. I love this story and really appreciate you sharing your talent for free when I know you don't have to. Best Wishes to you and when I can I will buy your books...whoever you are. Thank you again so much for the sharing such a story.

you certainly have a flair for writing and i wasn't surprised that you have your own work published after all. Damn fine reading, thanks.

Love reading your stories

Great story, please keep writing!!!

This was a great chapter! So much more in depth than in the ASP series! Very sweet that they are talking things out first. ;)

I thought she was gonna go for it, I really did. I love when they do that though. I like how he's so accepting of how fragile she is, and how she's opening herself open to him. Maybe she'll stop saying fuck as much...

love the story!!! Really, really good!!

misswizz

Ok so the trying to comment on every chapter is proving to be too difficult for me lol . . But I'm trying. If i can't wait, i'll just vote. . Hmm, that seems reasonable.

Great chapter. He really was able to break through her defenses. Hope she doesn't push him away again. And jeez...husband's been dead thousands of years. She's gotta get over feeling like she's cheating on him. Cool stuff with him being otherworldly.

your stories are amazing. you have new fan.. :)

Thanks for sharing ^_^

Lol, Hunter's background isn't what I was expecting but that makes me love the story all the more! Nice to have an understanding male character too :)

...I don't know why you want us shallow thrill seeking bastards to comment on your work. Yeah, yeah, yeah...I see the characters, I got the setting, yeah...I get the plot, where's the fucking sex? Twisted, descriptive, mind-blowing lead up, follow thru and gratifyingly FUCKING SEX? threesome? rape? incest? beastiality between shift and human? See...disappointing isn't it? So, I just give my threes until those five's of aforementioned until the DIRTY, NASTY, MIND_BLOWING sex happens...*smirk* ~(s) Peeping Tom

I can understand you wanting feedback. As a reader I rarely comment. Normally because I cant be bothered or as it can take me bloody ages to think of any other than something banal or moaning because the author is taking ages to post (easy to forget life doesnt start and end with this site!)

I visit Lit for the stories. The ones that touch your heart and take you to another place. Make you laugh, cry and leave you wanting more. A good story has characters with substance, a plot and writing that makes sense (the amount that cannot write a decent sentence!) Sex scenes, written well, should add to the story not be reliant on them. I am not saying that some of the quick thrills are not, ahem, interesting to read, it just my personal preference.

This series is bloody good. So much so I have been bawling my eyes out of the raw emotion you portray in your writing and pissed off enough by the comment below me (apparently some people do not appreciate a good read). I will enjoy reading the rest of this series.

Wow the sorrow was very tangible in this story excellent , keep up the good work and thank you for posting

Just found you as an author. Loving the story. I can see many a late night till I read them all. Please keep up the postings, for us ungrateful readers, where would we be without writers like you.

This chapter made me cry! As did the last chapter. You're an amazing writer. I love the character depth and layers that you have shown, as well as the sprinkles of humor which, in my opinion, really makes an enjoyable read. Thank you, so much!

wow these past 2 chapters made me cry so much i forgot what website i'm on. i am so beside myself with how tragic mirage's story is that i'm speechless.

I’m really enjoying this.

Love it! Wish I had found it earlier.