All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 15'

as usual I am intrigued by your stories. I hope that somehow Selena was alive and what Dom saw was an illusion.

as for Hunter and that Braxton person...when will the evil dude get his just due?

told everyone yesterday she would use her wish for hunter to know his family!!! can't wait for the next chapter.

Glad Hunter has family and that Braxton is soo slippery. PJ xx

It's a bit confusing thinking of how all the different stories link up. All the relatives and friendships are a bit tangled and convoluted. I'll sort it all out though. I know you have a soft spot for Domino. I'm indifferent to him... slightly on the disgusted side of disinterested after that trick with Arielle. I'm interested in the idea of a vampire incubus. I think it's a great character to have... just not sure if I like Domino. However if you come to write his story, I'm sure I'll come around. Loving Hunter and Mira though and am looking forward to seeing them travel to find Katrina.

I like this side you're showing us of Domino, I think giving him his own story would be more helpful in understanding him with this chapter. But who is Katrina? Did you write about her in a previous story? Nick is related to Tynan but is he the same guy who was with that vampire mama?

I'm a bit confused, didn't Nicky turn Arielle into a Vampire? I mean, he fed off of her and then she drank his blood. And before Domino came to pick them up wasn't there a reference, that she didn't have a heartbeat anymore?

I love Domino, he's a great character, though be careful with the terminology: you introduced him as a succubus, now you turned him into an incubus...

I still love the story... when will Nicky find out what that orange stuff did to him?

MissWizz

The pain Dom is going through is soooo sad! Can't even imagine it.

Wis that girl Callista? How is it that Dom does not see she is no-good? Just had to ask ....lol

I know I will find out as I read on.

Keep going Girl!!!

Love It

Poor Domino :( you conveyed his feelings very well.

So I have been trying to leave feedback and I loved this chapter. You keep pulling me in more and more chapter by chapter.

Your writing is simply superb.

God I wish I wasn't so close to the end, love love love your stories they are amazing!!!!!!!