All Comments on 'Intervention'

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phil2213phil2213about 11 years ago
Great writer, Great Story!

The story was paced well with great character development and deep emotion. I enjoyed the story and fell in love with the characters with the exception of Mark of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you for a great story.

I am glad Ashley and Jack got together with the assistance of Paula.

However, I was concerned about the rage that Ashley displayed to Mark a she went down the hall.. That sort of poor anger management is nnt healthy, especially as it could ne day be directed to Jack or others.

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