All Comments on 'JNE-99'

One of the better stories

Wow! A deep, well constructed story with a wonderful dose of erotic sensitivity. Thank you!

I just found this story today and couldn't stop myself until I finished it. I just loved it. Full of tenderness and passion, and I just loved how the relationship grew between the main characters.

One of the best stories of androids and humans I have ever read. Thanks for it.

I loved this story. Touching and sexy. The growth of their relationship and her individual growth were nicely parallel. Wow!

Really delicious. The transition in Jenny's character is so well done, just at the right pace. The fact that she could be a perfect woman doesn't make it too easy: she has real character.

Quite a sweet little story and well-written too.

i loved this story well written and thoughtout. there is very convincing conversations as well as a great plot. i hope to see more on this story later!!

Wow, I thought this story was amazing. Very well written and convincing. I loved the story, the plot, the characters.

WOW this story is so hot The writer wrote beautiful its like your there you are in the story while your reading it . its playing in your head like a video .. great job

I won't say it, because it sounds ClichE'... (Hot ^^) I've noticed not many people can make as long an erotic story as this and not either repeat themselves or use the same descriptive words over and over. Thank god for great writers as yourself! This is a great story made by one of the few, great, and in high demand (Hehe...) persons!

Keep up the good work. I will read the next chapter in a few hours (I can't say tommorow its 12:13a.m. hehe.). Good work! Good work! Good work!

Hope you get a chance to read this ^^

-Zak Alfred.

I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of the writing and storyline. thanks

amazing sexy work of art,very realistic one would hardly find a flaw in the story,also great story line

I'll join the chorus: The writing style and storyline surpass most of the other stuff on this site!

excellent read and story

U're amazing..write some more of these stuffs. keep em coming! =)

Great buildup, great character development, and a great job leaving me wanting to know more. It was unflawed by errors as well. I take my hat off to you.

upto the point where there was an ambiguity about sexuality and the machine. The point where the android "wants" her ... well, you lost me there. But there were definitely sparks, let me tell you that :D

what a well-written, touching story - I thought the characters were presented so realistically and the style of writing really enjoyable. I liked the bits of pathos you included too - about what it means to be human, that world felt very believable.

thank you

It ended a bit abruptly, but it was a cute, loving story. Thank you. ^_^

Short but VERY well done. Unsure if there’s a sequel but I’m definitely checking out your other stuff now