All Comments on 'Loni'

What if we could go back and change some of the decisions we made when we were young? How would our lives have changed? That wonderful girl I loved then, would she be my wife now? Perhaps your story answers those questions.

Great story. Good luck in the contest.

So very well done. Enjoyed it tremendously. Five stars, for sure.

Life - what an adventure, hmm?

I love the way you time-check through to today, after plenty of uninhibited detail about your first summer.

I'm watching for more from you, NICEly done!

–WI–

> The one that got away from me was a girl named Loni.

Nicely told tale of love, careers, disappointments, and re-found love. Well done!

Have been on this site for at least 8 years. This is the first time a story has brought me to tears! OMG, great story!

good story I am not sure but seems to be missing somthing ?

Sweet !

As before, Thanks !

Fred the perverted bastard

Romance.....not!!!

Nice. Five stars.

JPB