by lmnop321
I thought it was great how your characters bonded gradually leading up to the last scene with all the different interactions they had before having sex. The storyline of how their relationship comes out of something sad is more believable and meaningful that way. Great job man.
steaming surprins sex scenes (loved the first one, and the last one) and a romantic ending...good job, would love to see more stories like this, keep up the GREAT work!!!