All Comments on 'Mall Walkers'

by Middleagepoet

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
the watcher is more guilty than the participants

If he didnt want the activity there all he had to do was say excuse me this is appropriate, put on your clothes and start walking. To stand, watch, and film is criminal.

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
My kind of convoluted thinking. I really--

enjoyed the whole thing. No kidding, I laughed all the way through it. A fun piece and I thank you, sir.

AlitheAlitheover 14 years ago
Shallow

I think you need something more substantial than the cursory story you decided to submit. The only credit you deserve is for the uniqueness in both presentation and idea. However, if the idea is very <i>shallow</i>, then your story is not ideal. I agree with the previous posters-- I don't know why this was an editor's pick either.

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Nice Creative Piece

A bit too dry. Perhaps you should have stopped with the first report

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