All Comments on 'Mental Telepathy Ch. 1'

Your stories are waaay to real! *lol* I'm enjoying each of them as well as the last! Good writing, really puts the reader in the moment with your characters. Keep 'em comin'!

Great story! One of the best I have read in a long time. I will have to read more of your work. And share this one with my friend Nancy ;)

The writing was well put together but the story line has been over-used. You could develop a sequel that would make it more unique and more 'you'.

I like it when you read a story, and you can put yourself there! kudos 2 ya

Very sexy, but gentle in both story line and presentation. For me the writing disappeared, a very good thing. It keeps my mind on the story and the excitement. I enjoy this on many levels. Thanks. It feels good to have so much unread and waiting to be enjoyed.

Definitely, definitely one of the best stories ive ever read!!! Seemed sooo damn real and i love that!!!!!!! Keep up the good work :D

As much as I like a good sex story, there are millions of em out there, so unless the story is exceptionally interesting or funny, its usually boring. Yours is well done. I laughed at how evil, yet awesome, it would be to do what he did to people in public. --Yoz

Loved it! They story had the right balance plus not being to long or to short. Left just enough for the imagination :)

Well Done

It took while to get the "head"! around the premiss but once there great tail. It be like being the invible man in a girls locker room oh what fun to had.

That was one hell of a good story, thanks!

certainly got my imagination running...well done john .

Holy fuck that was very innovative and well written! So hot I nearly came myself