All Comments on 'Nothing Gets Through Ch. 02'

I love these characters. Not just Dom and Lani but Karl and Dee as well. There's so much chemistry flying around someone is going to get hit in the head! I can't wait to see more!

I know this isn´t exactly the highest praise one could bestow on a story, but I think its very cute. The characters are flawed, but believable and likeable. I like how this is progressing, a little fast for my taste, but its still believable. Please continue to post regularly, well written stories are hard to come by on this site.

Very enjoyable! Looking forward to the next chapter.

I want to know Dom's past now more than ever.

'nough said*

and I'd give it a 5! This should be in Best Hockey Stories Ever. Your fan for life, estragon.

Fear and self doubt is part of every new romance and you have certainly captured theirs. The development of these characters is superb. There is not a single superfluous item in this tale. Including:

"Nothing relaxed a person like Avenged Sevenfold."

*snerk* Now I have to clean coffee out of my keyboard. Again.

A very good story, and very well told.

I think your grasp of situations and what folks say is something it will take me many moons to grasp.

Thanks

HP

so is this story...great characters.....love it

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