All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 20'

by Kathi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Oh my! My heart is skipping!

I love this one extreme to the other. Wow! Keep up the good work.I find myself logging on to find your story, then wanting nothing else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
The best story That I've read

I, too log on each morning to read this tale. I'm from SC and have been to the "Grand Strand" many time and can picture the story in my minds eye.Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Smooth

Nice ending Kathi.

As Always,

Ron

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Darn

This is a lady that I would like to enjoy. A late in life awakening with the right person.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
This vacation cannot be over yet

Kathi

Continue to write.

MDelight

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Keep writing this summer beack vacation

This story on the beach. Want to see or hear what happens with the older lady and what may happen with the younger girl lifeguard from the beach and all. look forward to more stories please keep writing something on this or spin off of this or something.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You can't end it here

Do they get back together or is this just a beach romance

Anonymous
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