by angel_grant
was a lovely story, i truely enjoyed it. keep writing...i'l definitely keep reading!
One of the best on this site in a long time. A very erotic narration of the evolution of love between two individuals with the age difference irrelevant. Very well done!
Absolutely loved this story. You took your time, slowly building. Very detailed in the growing attraction between the two. Very intense, very erotic. Got me very hot reading it.
This lovely story reminded me of my first -- the hesitations, the concerns, the wonder, the joy ...
This is the kind of story I love...hot, passionate, 2 people becoming attracted to each other then acting on it. Lovely story...keep up the good work.
That more young women could experience the pleasure
of mature gentlemen. Well written.
Wonderful build up, erotic, arousing, intelligent and well written as well. What more could any one ask for? Well, maybe a Patrick in one's life!
Beautifully written story. Please continue writing. You have made an older man very happy.
What an ideal, but hotly realistic sexual idyll! Combine an eager, gorgeous virgin in love, a lovely visit to New York's cultural centers. and a mature, strong but gentle and patient man in love with said virgin. Add excellent writing skill, and describe their splendid lovemaking in passionate detail. Oh, yeah, that works gloriously!
Very good story that is gradual with good details. You made it seem so real with feelings as well as deep energy.
Five stars, and a vote in the contest for the 11th Annual Literotica Awards.
Truly enjoyed everything about it. Wonderful writing, great build up, drawn out lovemaking. All excellent!
a very exciting hot horny story. love the brilliant writing and the story was a real pleasure to read, loved it from start to finish can wait to read more of this story.
This is one of my favorites stories on the whole site! So many stories have no build-up and are just plain, shall we say, crap. But this story has depth and romance and a build-up to it. Great job, Angel!
Tender, hot and lovely. This sweet tale certainly hits the spot. Patrick intrigues me. What's his story, I wonder?
Dearest angel,
This is fabulous! I started reading and couldn't put down the Kindle. However, after jumping my husband's bones (thus the tag line gratitude), I came back to leave you a big dose of praise. Great job!!!
This is my favorite story on Literotica.
You should give us the story from his perspective now.
:)