All Comments on 'Seducing the Bus Driver'

It almost seemed like she seduced him! ;) This was a hot little tale, Ms. Lips. Well done! Do you plan to make this a "series"? (A very popular practice here at Lit.) You obviously left this tale open for more adventurous romps between the two.

If there was a possible "complaint" after reading two of your tales it's just that they end too quickly! ;) As I said before, I look forward to reading more by you!

~Eve

I loved the play on power in this story an how they seemed to fight each other which Im sure enhanced the moement. very well written