All Comments on 'Sex, A Second Language'

Good story, though your cases need work ;-)

Fiery!! Love those "sneaky tendrils of lust" : D

Nice job, c_c.

I'm a reader not a writer as such I really liked the story, the use of Russian text was a surprise for me. One I thought worked really well.

Totally enjoyed he story and the intensity of the hero. WWB

even when you can't talk the talk, you can still walk the walk

Very hot! Enjoyed this sexy story - thanks!

Great story. I like the way Katie's voice comes across. And I love languages so this story really spoke to me.

This is one hot Russ... eh, story.

It's the best I have read in a while.

Good luck in the contest!

Maharat

Thank you CC ~ That was quite a story. Love the Russian in the text as well. Makes me hot to think of a time with someone like that too. Some things do transcend spoken languages.

I like the anonymous atmosphere and the attitude of katie.

Cute story, good luck.

The temperature stays up there in this story. Liked the use of the Russian characters too, it's a nice touch. Good luck in the contest!

Les(Darkniciad)

its a HOT one.

And hot, hot, hot. Very nice Ms. Chic. :)

Great story, Chic. This one has such a fun start (loved the initial translations) ... and the heat factor was pretty damn high as well.

I suspect that ESL (english as a second language) courses would have a remarkable drop out rate if SSL classes were offered instead. :)

A fun, hot read. Just one thing--we still don't know if Russians--this Russian, anyway--are cut or uncut. :-)

OMG!!! That roused me... If only I had someone to fuck like that. The guy I got has yet to please me...I've thought about dumping him but I think I am going to wait till Valentines and see if he pleases me then, if not he outa there. PERMANETLY!! I want some one like that!

Good to see you back after a lengthy hiatus. Great story--unusual story line--and also a great poem. Hope you will continue the fine work.

cool story!

your Russian is very googleish though :-)

if you want, I can translate some selected phrases for you want.

Alkyne.1 <at> gmail.com