All Comments on 'Taking Liberties'

Fun story. I will check you out more often.

see that that was really funny at first i thought it was a joke about the poker game cause of how you prnounce it but heh that was funny i saw a few grammar mistaked but i personally dont care about grammar as you can probably tell but all in all a hilarious story (very erotic too lol)

got you kitty by th e tail...ha

Dear Nimrods Son. Dit you ever read a story called "Halloween experiment..." by Balbylon? Well, I gues you have.

Hilarious and erotic at the same time! Way to go!

Halloween costume mistake not terribly original, though handled well. Liked the twist with the wife trying to catch cheating husband (still not resolved).

Cute as it is. Could have a follow-up on husband cheating? Possibly with wife making stupid mistake once again.

Read till the end and vote!

Your story made me grin.

Good luck.

good story, would love to know how she explained what she did to her hubby and how she didn't trust him

"Halloween experiment?

10/03/04 by Anonymous in The Netherlands

Dear Nimrods Son. Dit you ever read a story called "Halloween experiment..." by Balbylon? Well, I gues you have. "

It's no big deal. I've read at least 9 other stories by various authors with similar themes for a Halloween party. It's such a great oppertunity for identity mistakes, and there's really a good scene for anything that's possible to go wrong, going wrong.

My thinking anyway,

Kydreamer

Very well done...it's hard to write a short story like this where every word counts. If you like humor, you may respond to my entry The Mask, or for something completely different, Who Killed Lois Laynes? (in the New section) Good Luck, Sack

I want another chapter hehe to see what happened next.